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I think that my country has problems with pollution to the environment like all other countries. This problem is normal for Russia. We have big problems with transport because there are too much cars in our country. And because of that we have problems with atmospeer, air in my city and in all Russia is really dirty and sometimes I can’t make a sigh because it smells around me and of course around that cars on the road. I’ve heard about tradition of one country. They don’t go anywhere by car one day a month or a year, they just use bycicle or their feet. I think it could be very good if we had a tradition like that.
So, what about the rivers and the seas? Yeah, there are some really good and clean rivers and seas where you can go, but there are not many of them. Once I saw the river OB in my city, it was about two years ago but I stil remember that in some places it was not blue, it was green or purple I didn’t really understand because it had different colours.
I don’t know what should we do. Maybe we should just open our eyes and look what we did. But Russian people don’t care about the world around them many people care only about themselves an that’s all.
So, the best idea is look around and try to do something good for our planet and for us and our children.
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3 | All content is relevant to the task but the target reader is on the whole informed rather than fully informed as, the central question as to whether or not the problems can be solved has not really been addressed. The candidate discusses the environmental impact of transport and the cleanliness of rivers, and provides one suggested solution for the problem of transport (They don’t go anywhere by car one day a month). The writer’s opinion is clear in I think it could be very good if we had a tradition like that. No solutions are discussed for rivers and seas, and no third aspect of environmental damage is provided. | |
| 3 | The conventions of essay writing are used; there is an opening statement and a development of the subject matter, with a conclusion at the end. The register is suitably neutral for the most part, although the use of a colloquial yeah is not consistent with the rest of the essay. The essay is written for the most part in an objective way, but there is use of personal, subjective examples (Once I saw the river; I can’t make a sigh), which lessen the impact of the bigger problems. The target reader’s attention is held and straightforward ideas are communicated |
3 | The text is generally well organised and coherent. It is separated into paragraphs and the punctuation is generally used effectively, although there are some long sentences (And because of that we have problems with atmospeer, air in my city and in all Russia is really dirty and sometimes I can’t make a sigh because it smells around me and of course around that cars on the road). There is a variety of linking words (because; and; So; because of that) and some cohesive devices such as referencing pronouns, relative clauses and rhetorical questions to connect the ideas within the text. | |
3 | There is a range of everyday vocabulary used appropriately, and although there are errors, they do not impede communication (atmospeer; bycicle; sigh). There is a range of simple and some more complex grammatical forms: past and present verb forms are used with a good degree of control. |
To begin with pollution and damage to the environment is the most serious and difficult problem for countries of all over the world. Scientists of different countries predict a global ecocatastrophe if people won’t change their attitude to our planet.
First of all a huge damage to the environment brings a transport. People can’t imagine their living without cars, buses, trains, ships and planes. But it’s an open secret that one of disadvantage of these accustomed things is harmful exhaust. Needless to say that use of environment friendly engines helps us to save atmosphere from pollution.
In addition to this our rivers and seas are in not less danger situation. It’s a fact of common knowledge that numerous factories and plants pour off their waste to ponds. Obviously that cleaning manufacturing water helps to avoid extinction of ocean residents.
Apart from this I’m inclined to believe that every person can and must contribute to solving this important problem. Doing a little steps for protection our environment every day we will be able to save our Earth. And it’s a task of each of us.
4 | All content is relevant to the task. However, the target reader is on the whole informed, rather than being fully informed. Both numbered points (transport; rivers and seas) are referred to with some discussion of the problems caused (harmful exhaust; factories which pour off their waste to ponds) and some limited mention of solutions. No tangible 3rd aspect of environmental damage is discussed. While the writer does conclude with a strong statement of opinion (every person can and must) the reader is not fully informed on the solutions proposed (Doing a little steps for protection our environment every day we will be able to save our Earth) | |
| 3 | The essay is written in a consistently neutral register and the format is appropriate for the communicative task, using more formal language to introduce the ideas within the text (To begin with; First of all; It’s a fact of common knowledge). There is a clear essay structure with an opening statement, topic paragraphs and a conclusion which sums up the writer’s point of view. Straightforward ideas are communicated to the target reader but when more complex ideas are attempted these are sometimes not as successful (Obviously that cleaning manufacturing water helps to avoid extinction of ocean residents). |
3 | The text is generally well organised and coherent, using a variety of linking words and cohesive devices, particularly to introduce the ideas throughout the text (To begin with; In addition to this; Needless to say; Apart from this). The essay is clearly organised into paragraphs, which each deal with one idea. Occasionally the followup examples are not as clearly connected as they could be. For example, they discuss how factories pollute pond water and then offer a solution which would help ocean residents | |
3 | There is a range of everyday vocabulary used appropriately with some attempt to use more sophisticated lexis (a global ecocatastrophe; atmosphere; common knowledge; factories and plants; inclined to believe; must contribute to solving). There is a range of simple and some more complex grammatical forms used, and although there are errors, these do not impede communication (a huge damage; People can’t imagine their living without cars; one of disadvantage; in not less danger situation). |
DEVELOPMENT VS ENVIRONMENT
If we surf the web looking for pollution and environmental catastrophes, we will find out that every country in the world suffers them. This is a natural consequence of the struggle between development and environment.
If a country decided to live isolated from the rest of the world, living on what it can naturally grow and produce, it surely wouldn’t be highly polluted. But we all want exotic food and technological items from all over the world, so we have to pay the price.
Investing on electrical transport would benefit the environment a lot. Even more if this electricity came from a natural source of energy like wind, rivers and solar boards. It’s difficult to achieve this because petrol companies will fight against these actions.
We also have to take care of our rivers and seas. We all have heard about factories throwing highly toxic substances to rivers, without minimizing their poisoning effects. A really strict law should be applied to fine these factories and make them change their policy.
But what about ourselves? We also can do a lot! If, when possible, we bought larger packs of food, we would be producing less rubbish. And this is only an example!
5 | All content is relevant to the task and the target reader is fully informed. Transport is discussed with suggestions of how using different forms of transport would help the environment (Investing on electrical transport would benefit the environment a lot). The candidate then evaluates the suggestion (It’s difficult to achieve this …). Water pollution is described and a solution is offered (A really strict law should be applied to fine these factories). The writer’s opinion is clear in the choice of modal should. A third aspect (waste reduction) is introduced in the final paragraph with a suggestion about how to achieve this (If, when possible, we bought larger packs of food …). The writer’s opinion is expressed clearly (We also can do a lot!). | |
| 5 | The conventions of the essay format are used effectively to hold the target reader’s attention. There is an introductory paragraph which outlines the issues in general terms, and the concluding paragraph sums up in more concrete terms, what we, the readers can do to help. The register is consistently appropriate and the subject matter is dealt with in an objective manner, for example Investing on electrical transport; If a country decided. Straightforward and complex ideas are communicated (It’s difficult to achieve this because petrol companies will fight against these actions). |
4 | The essay is well organised and coherent, using a variety of cohesive devices. The paragraphs are introduced in a variety of ways, using grammatical structures rather than obvious linkers (If we surf the web; If a country decided; Investing on; We also have to; But what about). More could be done to link across the paragraphs, to make them less independent, but the overall effect is of a cohesive text. | |
5 | There is a wide range of vocabulary, including less common lexis used appropriately (environmental catastrophes; highly polluted; exotic food; highly toxic substances; minimizing their poisoning effects; change their policy). There is a range of simple and complex grammatical forms used with a good degree of control and flexibility to convey certain ideas succinctly. There are minimal errors which do not impede communication. |
In your English class you have been talking about the fashion industry. Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. |
In today’s world, the fashion industry has a strong importance in people’s lives. The fashion industry say to the society what to wear and creates new types of clothes all the time.
Some people claim that the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives, they say that the fashion industry creates clothes that the society has to wear. Furthermore, the clothes’ price is extremely high and people, who can’t afford it, should not be in the society.
In the other hand, the fashion industry guide the people to be in a good appearance, because, nowadays, the appearance of the person is more important than the person itself.
In my opinion, the fashion industry doesn’t has a bad influence on people’s lives. It’s something which was created to help people what to wear.
5 | All content is relevant and the target reader is fully informed. The essay discusses the role of the fashion industry and expresses some negative aspects (nowadays, the appearance of the person is more important than the person itself) and also cost (the clothes’ price is extremely high). The candidate also expresses their own idea, suggesting that the fashion industry has a lot of influence on people (say to the society what to wear). The candidate concludes the essay with an opinion, which sums up the main points made. | |
| 2 | Some of the conventions of essay writing are used appropriately. The register and tone are consistently formal and there are some expressions which are appropriate for an essay (In today’s world; Some people claim; Furthermore; In my opinion). There is also an introduction and a conclusion. Although straightforward ideas are communicated, the target reader’s attention is not always held. For example, the final paragraph attempts to sum up the main points, but the ideas are not clearly expressed. |
2 | The text is generally well organised and coherent. There is a clear structure to the text with an introduction, main body and conclusion. Paragraphs are used for the development of ideas. The text is connected using linking words and a limited number of cohesive devices, some of which are misused. More use of pronouns would limit the repetition of key phrases. | |
2 | There is a range of everyday, topic-specific vocabulary, which is used appropriately (creates new types of clothes; Some people claim; extremely high; is more important than). Simple grammatical forms are used with a good degree of control, although the use of verbs in the third person is not consistent. There are attempts to express ideas using a range of grammatical forms, passives and modals for example, but these are less successful (people, who can’t afford it, should not be in the society; the fashion industry guide the people to be in a good appearance; It’s something which was created to help people what to wear). Errors are noticeable but meaning can still be determined. |
Fashion industry is very a discussed subject nowadays: they create and design new clothes everyday in order to satisfy some people needs.
There are many people who claim that the fashion industry is important and good for society. According to them, this industry design beautiful clothes and thanks to that every person can wear shirts, trousers or any acessory which is on today’s fashion.
On the other hand, the fashion industry in some people opinion, controls the market of clothes and because of that they can’t wear what they want to. In addition, the industry can increase the price of clothes, forcing people who don’t want to be “oldfashioned” to buy and pay a large amount of money to keep “beautiful”.
In my opinion, we can’t let the fashion industry decide what we must or musn’t wear. We shouldn’t judge people for its appearance,because that is not important. We must wear whatever we like, want and feel confortable with.
5 | All content is relevant to the task and the target reader is fully informed. The candidate discusses the importance of appearance in terms of fashion (this industry design beautiful clothes and thanks to that …) and concludes that We shouldn’t judge people for its appearance. The negative aspect of the price of clothes is mentioned and an opinion given on how this affects people’s choice (forcing people … to buy and pay a large amount of money to keep “beautiful”). A third aspect states how choice for consumers is limited due to the fashion industry’s control over design and the market (the fashion industry in some people opinion, controls the market of clothes) | |
| 3 | The conventions of essay writing are used appropriately. There is an introduction, topic paragraph and a conclusion. The register is appropriate for the task, using generally neutral language to discuss both positive and negative aspects of the question. Straightforward ideas are communicated, using some appropriate language (in order to; According to them; the industry can increase) to introduce the ideas, and to hold the target reader’s attention. |
4 | The essay is well organised and coherent. There is a clear overall structure and the ideas are linked across sentences and paragraphs using referencing, substitution and paraphrasing to avoid repetition. There are a variety of appropriate linking words and cohesive devices (many people who; According to them; this industry; thanks to that; On the other hand; In addition; In my opinion). | |
3 | A range of everyday, topic-specific vocabulary is used appropriately (to satisfy some people needs; good for society; controls the market; forcing people) but some errors do occur with less common lexis and expressions (on today’s fashion). A range of simple and some complex grammatical forms is used with a good degree of control (can increase the price of clothes, forcing people who don’t want to be). There are some repeated errors with prepositions and third person verbs, but these do not impede communication. |
The society we live today is characterised by technology in constant development, fast speed processes, information travelling and getting to people at a blink of an eye and a complex web of social networking. In this context, the fashion industry is becoming increasingly important and having a more and more paramount role in our lives.
On one hand, the fashion industry is undeniably a source of profit and income. It hires millions of people all over the world and generates millions of dollars every year. Furthermore, such profitable business is also believed to be able to spread and make known the culture of a people, encouraging and enhancing a better understanding of each other.
Nevertheless, for those who are neither impressed nor motivated by numbers and figures, the fashion industry is seen as one which segregates people, isolating those who not fit their laws and commands. It is stated that people place too much importance on appearance and the material, world, sadly true, and the fashion industry just spurs on such situation. Moreover, not only are the costs of fashion item unrealistically high, it is thought to be a money better spent on more pressing issues, such as poverty and hunger.
I do believe that the fashion industry, as it is today, has a harmful effect, because it values a minority of people in detriment to the majority. However, it has such a wide reach that, it put into a good use, it can save lives.
5 | All content is relevant to the task and the target reader is fully informed. The candidate presents a balanced argument, discussing their own idea first that the fashion industry is important as it provides jobs and income for a huge number of people. The essay then discusses the negative aspect of the fashion industry in relation to appearance (the fashion industry is seen as one which segregates people; people place too much importance on appearance). Finally, the high cost of fashion is mentioned in relation to the price of clothes and it is suggested that money could be better spent on social issues rather than on fashion. | |
| 5 | The conventions of essay writing are used effectively to hold the target reader’s attention. The register and tone are consistently appropriate and there is a range of suitable expressions which introduce both positive and negative aspects of the question, which are balanced throughout the essay. Straightforward and more complex ideas are communicated, making links between the importance of fashion in consumers’ lives and how the fashion industry affects people, communities and wider society (the fashion industry is undeniably a source of profit and income. It hires millions of people all over the world; it values a minority of people in detriment to the majority). |
5 | The essay is well organised and coherent. There is a clear overall structure and the ideas are linked effectively across paragraphs and sentences through the use of paraphrasing, substitution, ellipsis and referencing (In this context; It hires; such profitable business is also believed; Nevertheless, for those who; sadly true; such situation; not only are). Organisational patterns are used to generally good effect, for example links are made between fashion and industry, fashion and finance and fashion and society throughout the text, making clear connections between the separate aspects. | |
5 | There is a range of vocabulary, including less common lexis which is used appropriately in most cases (is characterised by; at a blink of an eye; paramount role; undeniably; the culture of a people; enhancing; neither impressed nor motivated; segregates; isolating; in detriment to). A range of simple and complex grammatical forms is used with control and flexibility to express more complex ideas. Although there are some errors, these mainly occur when more ambitious language is attempted and do not impede communication. |
In your English class, you have been talking about learning languages. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay for homework. Write an essay using the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
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“There are more reasons to learn a foreign language than to pass a test”
Everything around us revolves around language(s), it is the most important thing in our lives. Society would just not function without it. They are It is our future and I would personaly love to learn as many as I possibly can.
Not everything in life is done because it is necessary. Learning a new language can be a lot of fun. Many people only do it as a hoby, or their knowledge is something that brings them pride and pleasure.
Secondly, we have people who do it simply to challenge themselves. Truly I believe that having a great outcome that stems from your hard work and dedication to learn something new is a wonderful way to challenge prove your ability to yourself and others. Then there is travelling. It is very important to be able to understand and have a conversation with someone abroad, unless you would like to get lost or worse.
To conclude, I think that learning a new language is an amazing thing no matter why you do it. It is always better to do things out of enjoyment, but even if you do it for a test, that knowledge will always be useful.
5 | All of the content is relevant to the task. The candidate has discussed pleasure, personal challenge and travel as different motivations for learning a language, so the target reader is fully informed. | |
| 5 | The conventions of the essay genre have been used effectively to hold the target reader’s attention. Straightforward and complex ideas have been communicated: |
4 | The text is well organised and coherent, using a variety of linking words and cohesive devices: | |
4 | A range of vocabulary, including less common lexis, is used appropriately: A range of simple and some complex grammatical forms has been used with control and some fexibility: The errors do not impede communication: … |
Learning a a foreign languages is very important nowadays. English, in particular, is essential because it allows is spoken all over the world. That’s the reason why we start studying it from the age of six years old. Going abroad and being able to speak to native people is very satisfying and that’s why I want to improve my knowledge about foreign languages.
I decided to take this exam to know how high my level of English is, but also because I need this certification to go abroad next summer. I really want to come back to Cornwall, an amazing region in the South-West of England. I’ve been there twice with my family, but now I want to go alone. Only being there to England I can really improve my English comprehension and speaking skills.
Fortunately I can will have some English lessons which taught in English at university and I can’t wait for it because it will be an interesting challenge for me. Studying foreign languages is essential to live and to travel. It isn’t simple and I surely have to challenge myself everyday, but the result is so satisfying that we I can’t do without it.
3 | There is some minor irrelevance here, since the focus of the discussion seems to be the candidate’s personal experience and motivation, and the points about learning for pleasure and personal challenge are only incidentally addressed. The target reader is on the whole informed. | |
| 4 | The conventions of the essay genre have been used to hold the target reader’s attention. Straightforward and some complex ideas have been communicated: |
3 | The text is generally well organised and coherent, using a variety of linking words and cohesive devices: | |
4 | A range of vocabulary, including less common lexis, has been used appropriately: A range of simple and complex grammatical forms has been used with a good degree of control: The errors do not impede communication: |
In your English class you have been talking about learning history at school. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
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A very common topic that is being discussed nowadays is wether schools should teach subjects that some may consider useless later in life. A clear example is history, since it is quite difficult to learn and does not help us in day-to-day activities.
However, many people do not realize the importance of it or that it affects our lives today. For example, our political system would not be this way if it weren’t for the Ancient Greeks, numerous politicians and wars who helped shape democracy and our constitution. Yet it is still thought that it’s useless.
In addition, it is very important that we never forget about our past since we must know where we were standing years ago. Moreover, there are some things, such as World War II, that we have to remember to prevent them from happening again. We should also know where we we were standing a century ago: our origins, our identity. The more you learn about your ethnicity, the better.
All in all, I think that it is extremely important to learn about one’s own country’s history. Anyone who gets the chance to do this should not waste it, since they are very fortunate to have this opportunity
5 | All content is relevant to the task and the target reader is fully informed. The first two points have been discussed together in detail and a third point, about origins and identity, has been included. | |
| 5 | The conventions of essay writing have been used effectively to discuss the issues in an informed manner. Straightforward and some more complex ideas, for example the point about the Ancient Greeks and the closing statement, are communicated using an engaging tone which is suitable for a wide audience and which holds the reader’s attention throughout. |
5 | The text is well organised and coherent and makes effective use of a variety of cohesive devices to skilfully connect ideas both within and across sentences and paragraphs. Some organisational patterns are used to good effect, for example the parallel short statements ending the third and fourth paragraphs. | |
5 | There is a range of vocabulary, including less common lexis (numerous politicians; shape democracy and our constitution; our origins, our identity; your ethnicity) used appropriately. There is a range of simple and complex grammatical forms used with control and flexibility. Errors, mainly related to less common lexis, are minimal. |
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Businesses always play a vital role in our society as it a very competitive when it comes to its own contributions. They satisfy the people’s needs and wants. They can even provide an avenue to improve the lives of people to experience high standard of living. Businesses provide a way for people to obtain goods and experience services while earning something out of it. These goods and services provides improvement in the economic status, thus allowing people to have more jobs to apply. In this article, we will be going to tackle about creating essays involving businesses.
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Business essays tell about how someone makes earnings through the act of buying or selling a particular product. We all know that businesses are the foundation of profit and loss. It is also a very demanding profession that has been practiced and made popular over the past years. When you are in a business, you should be able to have a high level of skills in managing, building teamwork, patience and strength. You should always be physically, mentally and socially prepared and stable.
Business has always been incorporated with financial management , marketing, research, sales, safety and more. Before you decide starting your own business, you should be able to take note of the several considerations such as the type of structure that you are going to use. Businesses will also be affected by the scope and size of your firm. Other factors may include compliance requirements, control, taxes and the like. It covers different aspects in the industry which includes the distributors, wholesalers, companies, agriculture , financial services , manufacturers, transportation, utilities and more.
When you are going to set up a business, you will begin to realize that it affects your lifestyle. Every business success entails rewards, freedom, and personal satisfaction. Feels good, right?
Just like in any other essays, business essays also follow the three basic parts namely the introduction, body and conclusion.
The introduction of an essay usually is the attention getter. It is even the essential part of an essay. It usually tells the reader what to expect in an essay. It gives background about your topic and presents your thesis which is the central point of your essay. The first part of the sentence is the hook explaining why it is interesting to read. Instead of stating what your reader already knows, might as well state the reason why your essay will offer a different meaning and interpretation. Make the second sentence interesting by giving a background information about your topic and the rest are claims why it matters.
Your conclusion must be able to contain the three parts namely the restatement of your thesis statement, general conclusion and the answers to questions pertaining to the topic itself. When you repeat your thesis statement, do not use the words that you have written in the introduction. The general conclusion consist of an explanation of their importance.
It should be properly organized from the format down to the texts. They should be outlined well in the paper.
Business essays can be long or short. Long essays can be 500 words. Short essays can be 150 words.
We write business essays to provide a detailed information to help improve a status of a particular business.
Business essays are just like any other essays that has the same elements and structure. The only thing is that you just have to get the purpose of your essay and tackle about what the business is going through, their products and also their services. Always make sure that your essay is clear and written concisely.
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Write a business essay on the role of social media in marketing today
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In these types of question you are given one opinion and you then have to state the extent to which you agree or disagree with that opinion:
In this essay question type you are given two opinions, and you have to discuss both of these and then give your own view:
There are a variety of 'cause type' essay questions. In these you first have to give the reasons why something has happened, in other words the causes, but then discuss a different aspect of it, such as the effects, solutions or the extent to whether it is a positive or negative development:
In these type of questions, instead of discussing the causes of a problem, you need to discuss the problems related to a particular issue in society, and then suggest what can be to solve these problems:
In these type of questions you are asked to discuss the positive and negative sides of a particular topic. You will usually be asked this in the context of giving an opinion ( e.g. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Is it a positive or negative development? ):
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Type of paper: Essay
Topic: Nursing , Organization , Knowledge , Information , Health Care , Management , Education , Health
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Published: 03/25/2020
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A health care system has two types of models in practice including; the traditional model and dispersed model. In particular, the traditional model employed in a health care setting involves primary care, secondary care, and tertiary care of patients. In that, a patient goes to primary care and receives treatment of the common problems diagnosed. The problems that go unsolved are referred to the secondary care, and the tertiary care is for those cases that require intensive care provision. The knack to communicate ideas and information successfully is increasingly acknowledged as critical to the success of the health care system in general. For successful interactions between the health care providers and individuals but also in particular the health care providers themselves, effective communication is required. This function ensures an organization maintain productivity and efficiency. The importance of inter-departmental communication enables the growth of trust, improves the quality of service to customers hence ascertaining repeat business. In addition, it boosts efficiency in attaining delivery projections, and departmental conflicts in an organization are minimized where there is ease in flow of information. Therefore, this paper aims at describing a health organization and its ineffectiveness in departmental sharing of information. Also to be illustrated are the proper assimilation sequence of the knowledge management model tools in the organization so as to improve on the limitations and increase efficiency of operation within. Extensively, the patient centered medical home and the Chronic Care Management are integrated in the acute care system and the hospital in regards to delivering chronic illness care. The current payment and delivery systems provide a wide range of tools in dealing with chronic disease’s problems. Equally, the current payment system favors the acute care platform and is the leading driver of costs in health care but minimal efforts have led to its strategic engagement in complex chronic illness management. The presence of chronic illness management through the inclusion of acute setting and it is so because in ideal situations, chronic illness patients are usually admitted to the hospital. As the number of chronic conditions of a person increases also there will be increases in hospitalization for ambulatory care-sensitive conditions, rates of inpatient hospitalization, and hospitalizations that are linked with costly and avoidable complications For the health care delivery system and the health of patients, hospitals need to be engaged with devised strategies that would assist them adopt new knowledge management models so as to minimize the inefficiencies created through limited information sharing. These barriers to the departmental information sharing are inclusive of;
The particular transition time between care services can be of high risk specifically in the presence of poor information sharing and inadequate or lack of continuity of care. In inter-departmental care of acute care patients, inconsistency in information shared lead to ineffectiveness and poor service delivery to the chronic acute care patient hence severe incidences in patients even loss of lives might seem to occur. This would occur due to incompatible computer systems that are equally ineffective in disseminating the appropriate information.
In between the departments there arise issues in sharing the clients’ information either in full or partiality. These issues arose due to the limited or lack of training of health personnel regarding disclosure and confidentiality clauses and inadequate information shared.
The existence of overlapping care plans would be source of conflict during referrals and information shared as to the type of care required to be provided to particular patients. This in turn leads to inefficiencies in the departments as quality of care is compromised and poor. Information to be shared among the departments should be consistent with the practices and service delivery programs of the respective health care setting.
These tools support the objectives of the knowledge management ingenuities and equally development of information, access and storage as well as the sharing of information and its transfer. These tools include;
The electronic bulletin boards to be used are essential in disseminating or transfer of informal knowledge while encouraging sharing and collaboration. This avenue can also provide platforms for interactions inform of questions, answers, and comments which can be stored for future reference.
These repositories organize paper documents into large digital folder systems that are particularly housed on servers. The organizations design of the repository will provide a centralized location for the chronic acute care setting.
This will allow for the health care providers to share information online. This also provides for social sharing of ideas that would assist in synchronized engagement in communication and uniformity in the provision of health services especially for the patients with acute conditions. According to research findings, the process of successful implementation is in three particular stages that occur concurrently i.e. adoption, acceptance, and assimilation. However, there are factors that influence the three implementation stages limiting its successful completion. These factors include;
- Design influences; Expected results, innovation characteristics, communication characteristics, and fit. - Limitation to design; Technological infrastructure, environment, organizational, and resources characteristics
- Design influences; Performance and effort expectancy - Limitation to design; Attitude towards tech-use and social influences
- Design influences; Process characteristics, and system characteristics - Limitation to design; Institutional characteristics and management characteristics Therefore for an over haul from the traditional models employed to the incorporation of the knowledge management models the following steps are to be adhered to;
Some of the factors evident within the health care setting include; commercial advantage, characteristics, cultural values, organizational viability, information quality, and system quality. Therefore for its promotion to adoption; - Start by performing an internal analysis of the health care organization - Evaluate the knowledge or information needs, communities of practice, and lines of communication among departments. - Conduct a detailed cost benefit analysis while considering the number of patients attended to in the chronic acute care department, size of the firm, frequency of use, complexity of the system structure, maintenance costs, training costs, security concerns in regards to the enhancements in performance; lower costs as compared to the previous model, and lower response time. - Assess the existing work practices and the determination of how to improve the system from the present systems - In addition, the more precise approach the knowledge model, the less advanced the required solution.
Here, there are factors outlined such as ease of use of the models, anxiety, core motivation, results demonstrability, job-fit, and social factors that would hinder the swift acceptance of the new KM models. However, to improve acceptance it is required that; - Encompass the users in the implementation and design process whenever possible - Involve the user in the system evaluation whenever necessary - The system to be adopted should made as intuitive and friendly as possible - Maintain the multiple standpoints of the stored knowledge - Provision of suitable managerial an technical support - Also, employ product campaigns to promote the new systems all through the organization.
During the assimilation process of the knowledge management models, there are factors that arise including; management campaign, process cost, promotion of collaboration, knowledge barrier, and process quality. Therefore to improve this assimilation the following need to be considered; - Information management: A system’s content is required to be kept relevant through filtering, revising, and regular updating for it to remain suitable. - Apparent alluring factors: This includes the management’s capacity to induce users in these departments of the advantages of the knowledge management models - Appropriate budgeting: That involves the implementing a cost effective knowledge management system and planning for the expenses. - Focus on group effort: Particularly the adoption of a knowledge management system that promotes teamwork and is popular among the personnel and it is cost effective as well - Management participation: The entire organization’s management must campaign for the assimilation of the knowledge management models at every level. In essence, these factors affect the successful adoption of the KM models hence an improved information sharing amongst an organization’s department such as e-mails. However, in the chronic acute care management department, the strategic effect of implementing the knowledge management systems that expressively aims to alter the normal operation within the organization needs careful planning and appropriate considerations.
Enhancement of knowledge management as an information sharing and communication tool is to be achieved through the initiatives that mirror the pomposity of concerted person centered care; this is already in practice in certain countries like Australia. The chronic acute care providers inclusive of other primary providers should operationalize care planning and the exclusion of collective and effective communication of care that reinforces it within their run through with patients and the entire care team members.
Knowledge management is the organization, development, and leveraging of knowledge capacity in an organization. This chronic acute care setting is involved in the care of severe cases in patients who mainly are transferred from the primary care setting. However, the successful implementation of knowledge management models in a traditional model organization is faced by various factors that hinder including; uncertainty around client and interagency consent, fragmented communication among the health care departments, and the presence of overlapping care plans. Also, tentative steps are to be adhered to so as to ensure the adoption, acceptance, and assimilation of the new knowledge management model is uniform among departments. This will ensure collective follow through of the models by the health care providers eliminating inconsistencies in the quality of service provided.
This particular topic is of importance in understanding of the rigidities in health care systems, adoption, and practice of models that ensure quality is provided for to the patient. The elaboration on sequence of implementation of the KM models shows the severity of the in depth course to be undertaken in institutions to achieve certain objectives hence the need of more appropriate and improved provider training. The previous opinion held by me on the impaired information sharing among departments in health care that needs to be assessed and more improved models adopted has been strengthened by the research conducted in assessing a traditional health care model.
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